Not your best peice but it was allright, good flow and nice vocab, overused topic tho, well i took my time from my busy life to hit this up when i shouled be studying for french, fuck french tho i hate it i jus like it cuz ppl call me antoine in there, i dont like my other name, back to you, what you need to work on in this peice in rhyme sheme, basicly in the 1st verse though that couled use a little bit of improovement

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