punches: venom
structure: venom
intro: venom
outro:venom
flow: venom
other: none

it, your verse had no flow, i think you only had like
2 or 3 things that actually rhymed.

venom, you shit was aight, not the best, but enough to get my vote.

since i took my time to tell you what i think, hit up the theunderRated vs yungthug619