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Old 01-22-04, 08:41 AM   #5
rule
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I really enjoyed this. The structure was good, flow was good, vocab was good.

This had a sudden twist...you ended it in a way I wasn't expecting..which was cool. I liked the topic..it was creative and enjoyable to actually see somebody right about there elders. Enjoyable read..i really liked it.
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