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Old 01-22-04, 09:42 AM   #4
menolin
\/ pissing me off!!!!
 
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the use of fake metaphors leaves the RB jury with 'corrupted visions',
before, real voters get here, ur d/r team takes it with intricate precision,
'consider my sonned' that couldn't be 'farther'* from the truth,
this kid, getting 'slated' so much, you'd think im droppin of the roof.**
like 'trees' in autumn, he should 'leave' my battles alone,
because my punches connect more, than the internets line of phone,
my verse might as well be 'ghost' wrote, this kids hair stands on end***
like 'peter pan' only time this kid consumes(MC'S), is when he pretends!
Look at this lord with a ring..dressed, posin all classy & smiling..
Ur girl overdid the eyelining..
& she still looks like somethin that's surrounded by white outlining




*farther=further
**you should get it, we have slate on some roofs over here!!
***his pic, last two bars
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108410
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