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Wow..Both These Verses Were Very Well Writtin, I Enjoyed The Different Aproaches.
Evolve- Good story line, you expressed your self throughly and very impressive and the emotion bit..you drew a nice picture. Also the flow..it was nice the way it rolled.
My faverite line was this...
Im Trapped In Shame .. But I Cant Blame Your Freedom
Cause Im Locked Into My Self With A Cage Of Deamons
That was really powerful. More quotable lines but i'm not gunna.
Well Done.
Skiddz- Unique piece. I enjoyed it's realness and the value you had to it. The flow was good but the story line was neat. easy to follow i really enjoyed the last line..because it is very true...probably...i don't no much about gov.
Over all...I am going to go with evolve on this..even though it was really close.
V: Evolve
Good Job Both Of You..Both Excellent Reads.
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