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IP:
I'd have to go with Evolve's verse as well...
His was just easier to understand and flow with.
Told a story, and provided real nice emotion and imagery.
Skiddz was dope too, no doubt.
The message came across strong, and the meaning was tight.
Important.
But I couldn't grasp any imagery on this.
It's like I was reading a billboard.
A real hard-hitting billboard, but nonetheless, this came across as somewhat emotionless to me.
Maybe that's what you were going for, symbolizing the government's point of view towards us...
If ya did, kudos...
But I was still moved more by Evolve's cry for forgiveness.
Maybe it was his great imagery, definately the heartfelt emotion, and...maybe...it's because I've asked for similar forgiveness.
Great verses...
But, Evolve
Peace
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