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Old 01-22-04, 12:09 PM   #3
Dev
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pretty good drop here... (if i dont mention the centering)... the first verse started off decent, but then the flow kinda fell, with the way you jus stopped the rhymes, but the second improved, a good smooth flow going, and the scheme was better, same with the rest, quite consistant,,, i would say, use more internals to livin it up a bit, but i liked the concept and it was executed quite well.... decent drop...
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