nice to see both of you SF reps. in here...

rule-HELLA LONG! lol... i did read it all tho...your piece was strong with content and from the heart, it's a simple way to hit the topic, but that's how our mind's are changed sometimes...well the imagry was good, a pretty good rhyming scheme...
flow was good ya know...nice vocab that always taps shit off...

nlitend-HELLA LONG ALSO!!!! lol... yes i read yours all the way thru too...your piece wasn't the best... i think you've done better...the complexity was slim...vocab could help you out some too...but imagry was ok...the way u hit the topic was dope...but you just didn't seem to go all that well with it...but it was still a decent piece...

but...

vote-rule

he just had a stronger piece