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IP:
im going wit N-LitEnd on this one i just think
this wus an overall better verse... i wus lovin
the aproach voices in your head... i didnt need
the explanation sefl explanitory... some lines didnt rhyme
but overall good verse good lines and the edning came
off quite well too...
rule you had a good verse too good wordplay
hell lots of multis and good aproach at the topic
but you lacked creativity in my opinion...
which is the only reason im goig with
nlitend...
good job both!
Vote-N Lit-End
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