Thread: still at it
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Old 01-22-04, 06:03 PM   #4
Dev
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i aint gonna bother going into detail... it needs to be upped, add some multis and internals, carry the rhyming further, also up the vocab.... and your better off with a good strong topic, thats interesting...and work on ya syllable count..... so work on it....
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