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Old 01-22-04, 06:05 PM   #6
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Born To Kill-Nicely written piece good vocabulary...
creative apraoch to this very well written
multis were great and wordplay had plenty...
an overall good verse from start to finish
the way it ended had a little twist pretty creative...

Auspicious- very creative nicely approached
this surprised me i thought born had this from
the start... but you surprised me... good
wordplay and vocabulary not much multis in there
but this wus very on topic and had twists to it
i like this verse overall more than Born's verse
just wus more into it....
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