Thread: No Regrets...
View Single Post
Old 01-22-04, 06:28 PM   #6
Dev
1E
 
Posts: 1,512
From: N.E.England
IP:

i agree this was better than ya other peices, but ya still got a long way to go,,, it was quite expressive and flowed ok, mostly,,, but it lacked in complexity and quality.... but better.... keep working on it..... good vocab in a good order would help this out...
Send a message via AIM to Dev   Reply With Quote