Born To Kill- Verse had nice little storyline to it. It seemed to lose focus on its topic though, when getting in depth with the girl. Thats where it was weakened for me. It had a nice twist ending but something I could've expected.

Auspicious- Nice job incorporating multies and very nice vocabulary. You stayed very strong on topic, many nice lines, and the emotions were put in wonderfully. It was emotional, and you kept the topic focused very nicely.
V/-'Spicious

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