BTK-the best i've seen from you yet...the imagry n depth in this piece was good.. your flow could be worked out a bit better, and a limited amount of usage of vocab but that's coolio with me...you hit the topic good...but the whole girl thing i've read about millions of times

Aus-what the...that was dope..lol........the flow was tight...especially in the middle of the piece... your conent was very strong along with the imagry of this piece... i loved the twist...soemthing we weren't all expecting but yeah i started getting into this here... keep it up and u'll be back up contentding for that title

vote-aus


reason-better piece