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This was pretty good, a nice aproach. flow was good...fell off sometimes...probably just the way i read it though. i kinda stopped then went again...anyways..the aspect of this was good i liked the opening line to the first verse it was a good metaphore. also your imagery was good people may not of realised it but the way you graphed things out in each line did it for me. Good Drop. an thanks for the honest feedback on my "The Weathers Art"
Keep It Up
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