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Old 01-22-04, 08:49 PM   #10
Trapt Wit
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Def. an RnR structure here which I"m not a fan of at all....

But this was nice.... showed some good imagery while keeping a flow....

Decent topic.... could have been improved upon a bit but any topic can use that....

Overall, a good read.
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