B2K: First time I've seen any writing form you, acutally kind of suprised too.
The flow was choppy for me in the beggining but picke din the middle and at the end.
You sort of left the topic of current status though when talking about that girl.
Overall, nice verse, but nothing too special.

Aus: Your flow was on point all the way through, content kept me reading at my will,
Good writers voice, and the imagery was......great:::::::
overall it was a better verse. You both came well, but I wanted to keep reading your' peice.

Vote: Aus