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i don't got 100 posts for the poll vote, but i'll share my opinion...
punches- goes tah neek, i don't believe i saw any in pic perfects verse... neek had some nice punches
multis- obviously neek, but bro like 80% of ur multis were forced... multis are important, but when u stick them in just to have the extra multis and they don't have any purpose.."you happen-ta-be, outta-ya-league, battlin'-me, habits-to-key, baddest-disease, status-decrease, an catchin-a-leaf"... the flow was nice here and line at least made sense up to the habits tah key...but after that it was obvious ur forcing multis... keep ur multis managable, when u force em so much it takes away from ur verse instead of adds to it...but at least u use multis, bout 80% of the cats here don't...
wordplay-no one had any good examples of it
flow-neek...that string of multis took it
personals- none...
overall neek just out classed pic in every aspect....
vote=neek
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