Yo, here's my insights...
ReaLL.. so far thats the best verse i've seen u post.. keep elevatin.. also get better structure make it more pleasing for us to read. flow was ok. had some decent punches this time. not bad.... Iceman just had ya by a little in every catagory I can think of.. except maybe creativity..?? but its close.
Vote- Iceman
Return the favor. honest vote please. HIT UP MY BATTLE. gettin slept on real bad
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...66&page=2&pp=15