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Old 01-22-04, 10:42 PM   #7
Efusive
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From: Puerto Rico
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HAHA, i didnt read your whole verse, i read the 1st 2 lines
and said fuck it...LMAO

Enjoy

Please open ya text book and refer to refrained violence
You're so pathetic that critique's prefer to remain silent
I could rip this kid's ribs apart with my practice spit
And flip this hit spit by heart tearing this bastard's wit
Ya last heard shit's outdated kid ya better switch styles
It's no wonder I found ya name in Sacred Society's bitch-files
Like a one hit wonder ya mad because ya know ya pitch less
This verse's a sure hit it's just a matter of which fist
I see through your countless efforts begging for attention from RB
Contracted the ever spreading virus called "I'm the greatest newbie"
Vainless acts of self praise through conscious humilty disgust me
Especially from one caught bitting off verses unshamefully vastly
Must be thick skinned to have the audacity to step on these grounds
Last time I checked Mr.Zabron, I highly doubt rap was a Clown
It's sad for a fresh face to stride into a grave where ashes lay
Your future in shreads and sickeningly likened to that of Casius Clay
Point is this, do not jump to conclusions that you might be great
You'll forever remain a speck of dust if text is to decide you fate
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