bit slept on....

Even though you said it wasn't great technically, i thought it was alrite...the flow was pretty dope, you had some good internals and your use of vocab really fitted into the song perfectly.

But the real aspect was your emotion, i'm guessing it is a true, you put everything into this, and you showed that real pieces don't come through with flow and wordplay but wit emotion and that real desire to get your message through.

"only music occurs is rageful when worlds collide
Then he realizes true music comes from the love inside"

"Of all the dumb luck, he ruined the only perfect thing in life
The inaudible sounds of feelings lost led to constant strife" - to name a few dope bars....

Agree wit Prevailed that this should be nominated to Rb legends...4/5 dope dawg.



if you have time, not really our best piece but any feedback would be appreciated: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108666