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Old 01-23-04, 10:00 AM   #6
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Good battle.

B2K:
From Avalon ta Island, now Verbal Kent...
With all those identities...
It must be Sybil this kid represents.
^^Good opener..i liked the personal

Frontin a bitch, eye contact Av ain't conceivin...
But he don't turn his back...
Cuz he looks twice the pussy leavin.
^^Good line..decent punch

Never seen this name, just his usual suspects...
But it's a poor excuse...
Cuz when he called on my callout, he hadda call collect.
^^Wasn't really feelin that...although it was a good punch

And dumb enough ta wager, it just ain't fair...
That he lost all his cash...
To himself playing solitaire.
^^LOL..witty i liked that

More broke than bones that fell 50 stories...
Kid costs got him in a hole...
So he spits ta get out, but all he gets is glory.
^^Okie punch

And now ya back ta me, at my face and in...
But Av, if ya gonna do that...
At least have tha courtesy ta wipe ya chin.
^^LOL...i really liked that line..made me laugh

He keeps a closed mind, ideas bagged...
Cuz if his thoughts run away with him...
Then Avalon's gettin dragged.
^^Good personal

So stop perpertrating brains, ya just washed, G...
Not near a Keyser Soze...
In fact ya don't even rate Kobayashi.
^^Okie

I'm out, leave ya dreamin in a field of dumb...
Cuz Av, ya may build ya verse...
But not one damn vote's gonna come!
^^Simple finisher but good.

Verbal Kent:
This haters a has been... Verb's text'll retract skin,
Born's near to garbage, see his pics? he stood next to the trash bin...
^^Good persoanl...nice opener

this coward'll die hard... he'll need a life guard,
by bein 35 just now freestylin to make decent start...
^^didn't like that at all

Verbal's sick with the flow... and I'll rip this joke,
if skill takes you places, well godamn! you'll move a inch at most...
^^started off gay...but flipped it nicely

Verb'll drop next n' make ya opticals rattle,
who would have thought a vet would rather pose more threat-
in a topical battle..?
^^Good line

Av closely knows talent fool... but I'll be the test of dude,
n' simply stated the set up proves I've never known the best of you...
^^good line

I know ya lil on the gay side... but it's ok to have gay pride,
just don't put up any more verses... sayin how you rip guys...
^^another witty line

and I'll let bygones be bygones... no B... no hard feelings,
n' jokes are meant to be repeated... hence ya daughters fuckin siblings...
^^okie personal..couldf of been worded differently though

I really hate to point out... the family life of this clown,
cause they steadily tryin to move up... while Born's steadily holdin it down...
^^LOL...that was a great closer...witty

Over all..This was a close battle.

I'm going to go with Born to Kill..I found he was a little wittier and had more consistant lines.

Vote. B2k