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Old 01-23-04, 11:19 AM   #9
MeNTiLL
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This was a nice battle to judge ...

Evolve came with a deep and dope take on the topic ... Well written piece ... Nicely planed and thought out ... Flow of the piece was consistant and easy to follow ... Story was dope ... Drew me in from the begginin' to the end ... Dope way to wrap it up ... Nice job

Skiddz had a decent verse ... A different take on the topic ... Which was dope also ... Well written ... But hard to follow at times ... In my opinion I thought U should have spent more time on ur verse and U probably would have got it ... It seemed like U rushed on this ... That could be seen in the end of ur verse ... I didn't really like the way U wrapped it up ... But all in all I liked the verse because of the take on it ... Nice job

My vote's gonna have to go to Evolve on this battle ... I felt his verse mroe as a whole ... Seemed mroe thought out and was brought together in the end better ... Nice job tho fellas was a good read ...

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