Yo, here's my insights...
Wasn't really a close battle in my mind. Typo, need to elevate alot. I see what u were trying to do but that doesn't run here. Check out some other battles on the site, u need alot of punches and be creative with wordplay. Penskills, real nice verse, I was really feelin it. Keep it up. Nice punches, creative, wordplay all there.
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Yo, please hit up my battle with honest votes!! Its on like page 3 now I think but its almost done though. Slept on real bad.
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