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Old 01-23-04, 12:55 PM   #9
Mr W.Rite
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Diverse came half assed and still killed the roach
no hate to diverse i just know u can do better...
but for this one u didnt have to...a few nice line either way though

roach just needs to work...keep battlin..flow wasn't that bad
but punches just didnt hit at all..
structure is ok but could be better as well...make your lines even
it helps your flow...

and to be honest you might wanna change your name too Lyrical Roach.. lmao

v/Diverse
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