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Old 01-23-04, 01:35 PM   #6
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Hmm.. I expected doper than this.

FuE-xIoN.. I had trouble finding where your bar started and ended.. your structure completely through the flow off and ruined the affect of the punches. Most of your punches had potential but that's about it. No real hard punches. Wordplay was alright.. lacked, and at times forced. Although you did have a couple of ok lines.. I expected more from you.

MeNTiLL.. Your lines are little bit long.. shorten them up a bit.. but your flow was on point.. good flow... wordplay was lacking.. but u had some alright wordplay.. Punches hit pretty hard.. structure wasn't bad.. Again you didn't have any high light lines either. I expected more from you as well.

There were really no stand out lines in this battle, however it was a close battle. Don't get me wrong.. this wasn't a terrible battle.. just not as good as I had expected. Fue Xion.. you feeding off his verse in your last bar ruined your closer so MeNTiLL takes that part. He also definetly took the opener. I'm cool with both of you but..

..V- MeNTiLL
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