i aint really understand alot cuz my iq aint the best but

i made 2 colums:

nice and bunk;



BUNK:


Ill Travel A Trillion Miles If You Can Impress The Best/
And If You Don't, Youll Forget What Breathing Is When I Strike Your Chest/

- makes me wanna ambush you when you arrive, kill you first type shit. jus to be safe.

Antartical Brain Waves Rain On You In Blizzard Storms/ -
With A Heart More Glacial Then Hydrogen In Liquid Form/

- i dunno what that means, cuz if you aint got heart what the fuck you doin?

Five point Five times Four equals Twenty-Two/
Divide it by Two which equals the Eleventh Letter Thats Coming For You/

- 2 complicated for me sorry

I Suggest You Read Max Scheler's Man's Place In The Universe/
That States Before Ya'll Spit You Need To Rehearse Your Stupid Verse/

- fuck that shit

And Explain The Consequence For Facing Knave That Will Eat You Like A Lanner/

- da whaaaaaaaaat?


The Other Day I Sat Down With Charles Spearmen To Discuss The Human Mind/
He Was Disgusted When I Said To Be The Nicest Emcee Alive/

- that shits just plain 2 much for my brain to handle...


Scan My Resume Your Jaw Would Drop to The Ground/
When You Noticed How Many Emcees Got Ripped At Speed Of Sound /

- resume? speed of sound? noticed?

Im President of the National Rifle Association/ - you a HEAT SCORE!!



NICE!

Then I Commmunicate With You In A Telepathic Manner/

- SICK!

With Complex Rhymes, Non-Rehearsed Lines With A Mic/
Such A Bright Light That It Leaves Blind With Supernatural Sight/

- DAMN!

Ill Attack Your Retina and Melt The Cones and Rods From Far/
With My Rhymes That Are Hotter Then The Sirius Binary Star/

- SHITJEAH


its just 2 long for me to finish but someone can finish it off yo.,...


all in all you gotta USE MORE SLANG so plain OLD COPS CANT READ YO RIMES

like joe coudie does check it.

"THEY 2 HEATY like PEEDI readin HOW TO MAKE CRACK" - joe coudie