ok its cool except all the dam multies...there should be like only 2 multies a line...
the song is nice tho....stayed on concept...u stretch your lines too dam much son...

Could tell she’s facing depression, just by her facial expressions, can see there’s building of tension, between herself and aggressors/

nice^^

overall its cool...stay off that multie man...your good to go after words...

3.9/5...

Since I Replied To Yours...it would be fair if you did the same please...thx...

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