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Old 01-23-04, 02:02 PM   #9
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ROFL^^^^...anywayz it was real dope...nice imagery...lacking multies...vocab..and complexity.....nice flow...

The robber that wants to stop but wasn’t taught any else for Wealth/
The son that has no idea that at this moment his mother is suffering from declining health/
And the woman suffering right now because a man decided he is having sex with her even if he has to force himself/
The college student that won’t get their dream job because their skin is Black/
The young man or woman with a knife at her wrist at the moment and is about to pull Back/

^^^deep....

anywayz overall...4.2/5...good shit...keep elevating.....

Since I Replied To Yours I Suggest You Do The Same To Be Fair...Thanks...

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