Ok, here it is:
Rule- you seemed to be keystylin, so no doubt you could do better... but the only punch really hittin in ya verse was:
Acro Nim? What the hell is that..a new crew with respected vets?
Why the hell you on it..I haven't heard anybody respect you yet
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LOL not bad
my advice - less wordplay more punches/personals - but not a bad drop.
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Theo - more focused on punches, structure was nice, stayed consistant and I felt you wanted this more - not an excellent drop, but definitely worthy of Elevated FL. Only advice - keep elevating.
This was a good read, I give it to Theo for staying consistant and punchin more. Props to both though
vote = Theo
yo - both yall drop a honest vote here
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=104931 shit's gettin madd slept on