Alright - so youre saying i need more creative/complex wordplay and a more advanced flow structure?? I used to rhyme like with multi syllables...

xxxABC xxxABC
xxxABC xxxABC


I stopped because i was told my bars were stretched...but then im told this is too basic.... any suggestions??

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