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Flyweight
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IP:
This is actaully the only thing ive read from you and overall i think it was pretty damn nice...
The first verse was the only one i wasnt completely feelin, the flow was a LIL off there(to me) and you needed more internals like homeboy said...
2nd 3rd and 4th verses were all nice and consistant, final draft quality... I didnt expect that last new report to rhyme but that was tight too... your last 3 verses flowed alot better than the first and i was feelin it...
Nice ideas n concepts, you kinda made it original in your own way... Definetly an ill piece...
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