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Old 01-23-04, 03:58 PM   #11
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hey this battle was one sided.. typo had a lot of basic shit.. that line bout your mom was played the fuck out.. plus you didnt really have any punchlines that stood out
you could have had alot better punchlines and wordplay.. your verse gets a 4.5/10

penskills- you came kind of soft through most of your verse.. however you had 2 punchlines that took this battle
this line "My credit’s not even due here. There’s no pride in destroying a true queer
The only time he was full of AW was when he drank a tank full of root beer "

and this line "Wait for the votes… You’ll get more negatives then picture rolls"

were the most creative and hard hitting disses of both verses .. nice shit

now please hit this battle up with a vote






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