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Old 01-23-04, 04:02 PM   #13
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this battle was one of the weakest battles ive seen on this board.. swingaway your verse was horrible you had some played out disses in there and your rhyme schemes and punchlines were terrible matter of fact i dont even think you had any punchlines in your battle

youngthugga.. your structure was off next time try making the word your rhyming that last word on the line.. however you had some simplistic and corny disses also .. however im voting for you in this battle because you had better wordplay than swingaway.. both battles were weak ass hell but youngthugga gets my vote
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