This was a pretty good piece, nice take on the topic,
the content was good, you had some good concepts,
i liked the part about unlike eyes ideas are never really open,
dunno why, just some reason i thought that was dope,
flow was ok, vocab and the way you worded your lines
was dope, overall goo piece,
check this out
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109162