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Old 01-23-04, 04:09 PM   #27
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hey yo killer emcee you came with a long verse.. you should have just kept it short and sweet because alot of your disses were not hitting .. and alot of your punchlines and disses didnt really seem like hard disses. like that line bout one loss.. and a crew.. that shit wasnt reallly a diss dog.. lots of your lines were corny

losse change- you came pretty nice for someone new to the site
the nicest line you had was the last one "cus i aint seen such "stretched bars" since The Hunk escaped prison, bitch//~"

that was ok you had some clever lines in here and your punchlines hit harder tan killer emcees so i give my vote to loose change
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