Nice Topic And Pretty Good Piece Here Man. . Feelin It All The Way Through. . Flow Was A Little Choppy. . But Various Lines Were Dope. . Vocab Was Where It Shoulda Been For This Piece. . Overall. . This Was Enjoyable Although The Flow Was Sketchy. . Pz.

And If I sleep, More bodily functions Completed Than Eyes Opened
If thats the Case, I'd write in My sleep, For unlike my eyes..
My Ideas are never really open...
^ ^ ^ Dope Lines Right There Man.

Check Out "I Jus Wanna Talk" When I Get It Up. . Preciate It.

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