Your flow was very confusing..Not saying that the Piece as a whole was bad, but flow plays an essential part sometimes. It seemed kinda confusing as each line kept decreasing. You did it enough times to convince me that it was on purpose so I was wondering why did you use that. Other than that, this piece was very well executed. Good imagery, and its what I liked most about it, and it came a bit misleading but that is okay. Work on what Maven said, it helps out alot. Good Job and I hope to see more from you in the future.

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