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Old 01-23-04, 04:31 PM   #12
FormulaMC
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This Was Quite A Different Read Than Some Of Your Previous Open Mics Dev. . Enjoyable Nonetheless. . Flow Was On-Point For The Most Part. . Some Lines It Fell Off, But I Can Overlook. . Vocab Was Good. . The Concept Was Really Dope. . Only Seen It Used A Couple Of Times So It's Definately Original To Me. . . Nice Twist At The End With You Being Dead After Getting The Loot. . Overall. . 'Twas A Dope Read Man. . Pz.

Check Out "I Jus Wanna Talk" When I Get It Up. . Good Look.
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