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Old 01-23-04, 04:35 PM   #2
Born To Kill
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As a fellow father...

I commend you loving your daughter and trying to better yourself for her.

Way to man up.

As a writer, though...

You kinda suck.

Very simple format, no wordplay...

No metas, not even a good flow.

Great message, horrible delivery.

But keep at it...

Peace
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