Veteran
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IP:
As a fellow father...
I commend you loving your daughter and trying to better yourself for her.
Way to man up.
As a writer, though...
You kinda suck.
Very simple format, no wordplay...
No metas, not even a good flow.
Great message, horrible delivery.
But keep at it...
Peace
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For my convenience, not yours!
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