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Old 01-23-04, 04:37 PM   #2
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Nice Concept BTK. . Felt The Piece As A Whole. . Flow Was On-Point Throughout. . Vocab Was Nice. . Multi's Were There And Ill. . Some Real Nice Lines Strawn Here And There. . Ending Was Dope. . Killing The Three That Were Against You Before They Got To You. . Good Read Cuz. . Pz.

Even the baby mocked me, knowing it wasn't mine, see...
And my wife and friend were conspiring to kill me, accidentally.
^ ^ Baby Line Was Deep. . Many Dad's Have Babies That Ain't Theres. . 2nd Line Was Dope. . You Put Emphasis On Accidentally When We Know Most Deaths That Are Conspired By Three People Aren't Going To Be An Accident.

Peep "I Jus Wanna Talk" When I Get It Up. . Thanks.
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