A'ight man, to clear this all out, I told you last night to separate ya lines//
That's a newbie crime, just hope you can learn and do it right next time//
This battle has nothin' to do with our newly forged friend ship, but dang//
I want you to get out of the habit and start doin' things like it ain't no thang//
Really this is your first battle I can understand you bein' new to this site//
The reality is if you can't beat me you need to elevate to a new height//
This is a tutorial and I wish to inform you that I'll take you along and develop you//
Just don't get used to the kindness from everyone else will take it easy too//
Conducting you to the righ direction is all that this battleis meant to do//
You will soon see that battlin' ain't boastin' so this is an informance clue//
Kid take it slow and learn your way around before you come and try this//
In the dark you jumped in,look it's your first post, c'mon lets just finish//
Tutorial is over from now on it's serious and I suggest you develop real fast//
This kid's story's just begginin' and I wish him a happy ending, or try at last//

Yeah well we still friends, even though we just met yesterday, no hard feelings, good battle, but structure your verse so it's easy to read

Later