Thread: Corrupted Visions:Commercial vs Underground{A Must Read}
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Old 01-23-04, 05:29 PM   #21
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This was a very moving piece. a lot of good vocab and excellent flow. your metas and similies were worded good. definitly a great read.

Thnks for the feedback on mine...this was an enjoyable read.

Keep it up.
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