wow, lilt i can barely read what your trying to say here, it really doesnt make sense, you need to get a new structure, something readable, also it would help if it rhymed or had a single personal or multi, and your punches werent weak as hell.

amp. good battle, good punches and everything, but you took it kinda weak on him, seemed to have a more friendly air to it then like you really wanted to beat him, but still your battle by far

vote: amp