How can you improve without first hearing what is wrong with your writtens?
I dont post here to get one line replys proclaiming "Yo this shit was off the hook nigga, peace,1" I post here so other more experienced heads can point out where im going wrong and how i can improve.Basically what dev said about sums it up, if you dont take any notice you will not elevate.
check this out and leave some feedback
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109162