Yo, alright.. both your endings weren't very good so they kinda cancel each other out. Flow I liked on both, structure ok, chex u shoulda expanded some and used up more lines to throw more punches at him. he beat u in overall punches and hit you harder. creativity was kinda there on both. wordplay ehh... but DaSav got this one.
vote- Dasaviour
M_Chex do u see the battle I set up with u and me?? I PM'ed you but no response. I haven't gotten a chance to write my verse up yte, but its due by 10. Let me know if u know about it.
HIT my battle up with FairInHeight! Return Favor.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108266