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Old 01-23-04, 06:42 PM   #7
KoNcEpT
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From: Atlanta
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Derive....

This kid's a herb, just by reading all of his verses you see..
a bunch of filler with capitalization, i think you deserve everyone an apology
^ Filler.

Thats right, you wasted our time, everyone expected something tough,
and i'd give you some helpful tips but im afraid 10 lines just wont be enough!
^Blah Old Concept.

Emerge formed a crew thats all about compassion and gay pride,
and 'merge decided to join two crews, because of all the dicks he could ride!
Garbage.

His talents a piece of trash, like a condom gone wrong..
and the only thing 'merge killed was the paper he wrote his verse on!
^Meh - Nothing Special.

If every man hes been with turned straight i'd bet he'd yell out "please take my life"..
and i dont keep my punches family related because he covers that in his sex life! (meaning hes into incest)
^ It Had No Flow At All. It's Was...An Ok Line.


I often wonder where my wackness went that was built up inside
I deride.....
but with a sense of happiness...i found it deeply instilled in derive!
^ Ok.
You homo. . .sex punches are a no-no damn...I thought you knew
Fuck beating you black & blue...
....ama punch you in & out every single hue!
^Decent.
And this foo is isn't only a biter. ..he also chews and swallows too
Laughed when he said,...
....... "Even if i was Jill I wouldn't be jack shit next to you"
^ Alirght Wasn't Really Feelin It Though.
You personify ceramic....shit even with this filler i got you glazed
WOW. . .your home page was dope...till you named it purple haze
^ ahha - Made Me Chuckle.
You had no chance after all you still quote, edit, and explain bars
blah blah blah blah blah blah.....
^^^^considered quoteable when put next to your shit by far
^Meh - Played Concept.

All In All Emerge Took This Battle With Ease
Derive's Punches Were Horrible And Very Unafective
Emerge Came Decent Although I Saw A Few Played
Concepts He Still Had The Batter Verse By Far.

V/Emerge.

Polled.
-Axe
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