Thread: Eki vs COM
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Old 01-23-04, 07:03 PM   #12
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OK, here it is:

EKI - Ok verse, nothin spitacular (Jus fuckin wit cha) but I liked this punch alot:

"At first you name didnt make much sence.... but it hit me fast
Just like .com..... you always come last"

Good shit - but the rest of your verse seemed off.. not bad, just not on point. Ok drop though

Advice - keep elevatin, I don't really see too much weakness, just could have been a little more witty, some wordplay would have been nice, but overall I think you did OK

COM:

Vet skillz showin... the punches were witty, this one did it right here:

"My shit is harder to swallow... I'll make your sorrow worse
Your verse is harder to follow... than a tank in reverse!"

Loved that one. Overall consistant, decent punches. Only advice - more personals, and a couple of the punches seemed half assed, but not enough to make a negative impact on your verse since your half ass is better than mosts best try. good drop

vote = COM

please drop an honest vote here:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=104931

been slept on too long

thanks
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