OK, here it is:
EKI - Ok verse, nothin spitacular (Jus fuckin wit cha) but I liked this punch alot:
"At first you name didnt make much sence.... but it hit me fast
Just like .com..... you always come last"
Good shit - but the rest of your verse seemed off.. not bad, just not on point. Ok drop though
Advice - keep elevatin, I don't really see too much weakness, just could have been a little more witty, some wordplay would have been nice, but overall I think you did OK
COM:
Vet skillz showin... the punches were witty, this one did it right here:
"My shit is harder to swallow... I'll make your sorrow worse
Your verse is harder to follow... than a tank in reverse!"
Loved that one. Overall consistant, decent punches. Only advice - more personals, and a couple of the punches seemed half assed, but not enough to make a negative impact on your verse since your half ass is better than mosts best try. good drop
vote =
COM
please drop an honest vote here:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=104931
been slept on too long
thanks