View Single Post
Old 01-23-04, 08:39 PM   #13
Derive
Elevating Beyond Perfect
 
Derive's Avatar
 
Posts: 1,141
IP:

Wise Ways: Couldve came a lot harder. Wasnt really feeling your verse much, you had a nice structure but thats about it.

HardHitter: Structure needed some help with. You had some nice punches, but also, you need to improve. Work on your structure and on wordplay.

V/ HardHitter