Well Bane got this with some nice punches and clever wordplay. I would say this wasn't even a contest.

Banes Opener:
his shine's-dismissin, whackness and amateur defines-his-dissin/
how u gonna win a battle when all of ur punch lines-is-missin?/
Dizzys :
Now im jus wannin 2no did u grow up on the streetz,
Listenin 2 sum ill,siik beatz./

That reall sums up the whole battle, Dizzys shit was unimagitive... you have to come up with shit that makes voters go like " that was clever" or " he got him with that one" but your shit never did nothing for me really

Dizzys Closer:
jus tell her straight u prefer Gays,u dnt think she fine,
i'll comfort her say things like"cum 2 daddy u can be mine!"*1
^
Now thats wack. You cant expect to win any battles with shit like that. Anyoen oculd rhyme fine and mine.. you just have to use your imagination more.

Look at his closer:
if your tryin tah decide whether-its-a-shame that he'll never get better-in-the-game/
seems my words took so much out of him all he's got left is the last letter-of-his-name!/

^ it was a bit strached.. but the point came across well... and made the reader Go thats funny shit....

Bane your good.. maybe try not to strach your lines so much. But you go this one for me by a mile